Disturbia, fiction, family, friends, and everything else between the lions.
Published on November 2, 2006 By Tova7 In Fiction Writing

Chapter 31

 

Mikota stood naked and watched the suns set from a window in King Kryler’s chamber.  Sleek dampness leaked down sore inner thighs to drip on the cold stone floor at her feet.  A fitting place for his seed, she thought, and refused to think about the contents of her belly.

 

She did not turn from the window or bother dressing.  Slaves silently filled the huge bronze tub with steaming hot water and changed the blood and seed soaked sheets.

 

The king was gone on castle business for a few short hours.  He slapped her naked bottom and commanded her to bathe for a long night of rutting upon his return.

 

She heard the door click softly as the slaves left the chamber and turned toward the bath.  She lowered slowly into the scalding water for the second time in her life.  The water stung her feminine folds, sore and torn from the king’s thrusting.

 

She reached for the lye soap and tried to scrub his touch from her skin.  She was disgusted and confused.

 

Thrown so off guard by the witch’s words, she was unable to concentrate, to summon any power at all the first time the king ravaged her body.  It was fast and painful, the king taking her from behind.  Of course the spiced wine he forced on her off and on all day long stopped any clear thinking.

 

After that, her thoughts did not string together more than two at a time.  The things the king did to her body, made her do to his, disturbed to such a degree she could not think about them without being ill.  So she retreated inside her mind and let him have her body, over and over.

 

Shame, hot and acidic, colored her cheeks.  He wasn’t content with her distance, so used his hot tongue and thick fingers to stroke response after response from her treacherous body. 

 

She scrubbed harder.

 

When the water started to cool she stepped over the wide bronze lip and grabbed the drying cloth.  She was checking to make sure the mark was still covered when the door flew open.

 

A woman in red leather britches entered.  Her black hair pulled up into a bun with massive black ringlets falling onto creamy white shoulders.  Two huge soft globes of flesh pushed up from an over tight black corset tied with red string in the front.  Piercing gray eyes pinned Mikota and froze her blood.  There was malice in those eyes and something else, something Mikota didn’t recognize.

 

“I am Renel.  Do you know me?”  The woman asked.

 

Mikota immediately dropped her eyes and fell to her knees.  “I do.”  It wasn’t exactly the truth.  Mikota never saw the woman before but she knew of her.  Renel was one of King Kryler’s sisters.  One of many locked up tight in the women’s wing of the castle so no black knight might be tempted to soil them.  The wing housed its own kitchen, private court yard, and slaves.  The women only ever left the protection of it while with the king.  All except Renel, who was the most head strong and rumored the most vicious, with a temper even hotter than the king’s.

 

“Good,” the woman said and walked toward Mikota, red leather creaking softly.

 

“Stand and remove your drying cloth,” she said.

 

Mikota did not hesitate.  Her cheeks heated as she stood naked before the woman. 

 

“Look at me,” Renel said.

 

Mikota lifted her purple gaze to meet the cold stony gray eyes.  Renel was beautiful, her skin perfect.  Her jaw was almost square and her face full of harsh angels.  A slight smell of jasmine wafted from her.  Large emeralds adorned her ears and throat.

 

Mikota tried not to stare at such harsh beauty blatantly displayed. 

 

Renel raised her dark black brows and sighed.  “We are being over run with purple eyed whores.”  She shook her head as if to clear it, sending dark ringlets dancing.  “No matter.  Like what you see slave?”  An emerald ring flashed as she rubbed a soft white hand gently across the expanse of her exposed breasts.  Then just as quickly, the emerald laden hand slapped Mikota’s face.

 

Mikota’s cheek stung and heated, her eyes watered.

 

Renel smiled and cupped Mikota’s face almost tenderly.  She drifted a forefinger down Mikota’s neck and outlined her prominent collar bone, then leisurely cupped Mikota’s full right breast in her palm as if weighing it.  Her gray eyes focused on the perfect globe.

 

Mikota's heart thumped hard.  She wanted to pull away but kept herself very still.  If Renel was anything like her brother pulling away would only make her more aggressive.

 

“My brother is in the dining hall at this very moment regaling his soldiers with stories about his sweet tasting virgin.”  Renel’s thumb rotated gently on a nipple causing it to stand erect.  “I listened from the alcove above the hall.”

 

Bile rose in Mikota’s throat.  She swallowed it.

 

“He said your moans drove him to such passion he plans to keep you here, locked in his chamber, until he tires of you.”   The back of her fingers brushed Mikota’s flat stomach.  “He spoke of lushness and wet heat.  I dare think more than one slave will be ravaged tonight by the hearers of such an amorous tale.  But I see for once, my brother was not lying.”

 

Mikota did not move but her heart felt as if it would jump from her chest and run from the room.  When Renel’s hand cupped her femininity and squeezed, she flinched from the shock and pain.

 

Renel smiled and pulled her hand away.  “It is as I thought,” she said.  “You are sore from his rutting.  My brother can be a passionate man.”  She pulled a clear glass vial with white powder from the waist of her leathers.  “You will mix this with water and drink all of it tonight to keep from conceiving.”

 

She laid the vial on the table beside the bronze tub.

 

Mikota couldn’t take her eyes off the small glass vial.  A way to keep from conceiving?  She wanted the white powder in the vial more than she wanted Renel to leave.   It represented life.  Survival. 

 

Renel moved from the tub toward the bed, her back toward Mikota.  She stopped and stared at the fresh linen for a long moment.

 

“You will not tell my brother I was here,” Renel said then turned to pin Mikota with a steely look.  “In fact slave,” she practically spat.  “You will take no pleasure in his coupling.  I know most slaves are bred whores, but you will forgo your nature and heed my words.  Do you understand? ”

 

Mikota gave a nod not really understanding at all.

 

“Good,” Renel said and swept from the room slamming the huge wooden door in her wake.

 

Mikota took in a shaky breath and lifted a hand to her still stinging cheek.  A small flame of anger ignited her belly.

 

She grabbed the vial and placed it with her red silk robe on the chair.  Then found her place in the middle of the king’s bed, the spark of an idea forming in her head.

 

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Comments
on Nov 02, 2006
I often wonder how authors do it.  Weave so many threads for so long before they converge.  I will not ask the secret, just enjoy the results.
on Nov 02, 2006
Hey...I haven't read this yet. I have to print it out. I am so excited because I see you have been busy.
on Nov 02, 2006
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on Nov 02, 2006

Reply By: jennifer1
Dr. Guy

Thank you.  Glad you like it.

Hey...I haven't read this yet. I have to print it out. I am so excited because I see you have been busy.

Yeah just a little bit busy.....my son's bday party is Saturday and it looks like my youngest is getting sick...fever and stomach ache tonight.....and I am expecting a house full of people on Saturday.  Heh.

Oh well.

 

on Nov 03, 2006
Even better than the last one I read. Good job Tonya!


I hope your son will feel well enough for his birthday.
on Nov 03, 2006

Even better than the last one I read

Thanks Forever, I appreciate that.

I hope your son will feel well enough for his birthday

It's not the bday boy feeling ill, but his little brother.  I hope he's feeling better soon myself....no throwing up, yet! woot.

on Nov 03, 2006
Wow, I've never seen this before! Where the hell have I been? This was good! I will start paying better attention.
on Nov 03, 2006
Shovel.

If you haven't read the whole thing. Do it. It is awesome. Tova will be signing autographed copies soon! Woo Hoo..
on Nov 03, 2006

Wow, I've never seen this before! Where the hell have I been? This was good! I will start paying better attention.

Thanks Shovel, coming from such a great descriptive writer, I will take that as a high compliment.

Kelly, hahaha, you and Angela should be public relations people...you guys rock.  And I love ya for the support.  Thanks.

on Nov 03, 2006
If you haven't read the whole thing.


I musta had my head up my...er, in the dark. I didn't realize it was here! Gots to do me some lookin' around

(or better yet, wait and buy the book!)
on Nov 03, 2006

I didn't realize it was here

That's ok Shovel, I coulda thought of something more catchy for the title, but as yet it is unamed...and Cade is easiest. hahah.

Just follow the links they will take you back to the previous 30 chapters...its long, but if you get bored and decide you have time to read it...I'd love any feedback...especially since you have such a descriptive eye....you can maybe tell me what's too weak, what works, that kind of thing.

I don't mind the "this really sucks because......" remarks either.  I can't get better unless someone points out my weaknesses.....ya know?

on Nov 03, 2006
....you can maybe tell me what's too weak, what works, that kind of thing.


Oh I don't think I could ever do that! I'm terrible at the critic thing, you know. Me? Critisize someone else's writing? Heh, I don't think so!

But that does give me a thought. Be cool to throw something out there and have someone else do a re-write on it. You know, to see what happens when they put their "spin" on it. Hmmm...
on Nov 03, 2006
(or better yet, wait and buy the book!)


Looks like you are going to sell more than just my copy. Glad others are getting to enjoy it!
on Nov 03, 2006
Be cool to throw something out there and have someone else do a re-write on it


You are a BRAVE man...haha. I don't mind people saying they don't understand something or I screwed something up...but the actual telling, well that is what makes it mine. Ya know?

I like the grittiness of the things you write. I'd love to be able to have that ability and incorporate it into some of my scenes (like this one for instance...I went for a more gritty kind of scene, but in the end I took most of it out because it didn't fit in with the rest of the chapters, it looked like someone else wrote it if that makes sense..and that someone was "trying to hard" so this is what I ended up with.

You have a talent to take the mundane things of life and make them come alive. That is REAL talent Joe. It is your "voice." I think you could post some of your things anon on JU and everyone would still know its you.

IMHO it takes a really good writer, someone who makes an impression on people, to be recognizeable without a name.